A fridge thinking about its future. It fancied a change of scene but is now missing the kitchen. ‘I had a worthwhile job there,’ it muses, remembering the milk and the butter dish.. ‘Out here, I’m just in the way,’ it sighs to the silent tarmac.

A good fridge, in the wrong place. Needs moving. That’s what editing is about. Your words aren’t ‘wrong’ but they might not be in the best place.

Just as the fridge made me stop and think ‘what’s that doing there? Flytippers!!’ , a misplaced word will slow your readers. A fridge works best in a kitchen. And words can work best with an edit.

Important stuff should be easy to read.

Sans Forgetica is a new free font that’s scientifically designed to help you remember study notes. The little gaps in letters and a slight backward slant gives it ‘desirable difficulty’, which slows down reading and triggers memory.

A font-based top tip for proofreading – especially your own work – is: change the font when you print it out. Switch from onscreen Arial to American Typewriter on paper, say, or Times New Roman to Courier, and it suddenly seems fresh. Those strange spellings and missing spaces jump out at you. Also try changing the font size, and scattering bold through the text, especially if it’s a long document.

Like Sans Forgetica, this font switch will slow you down, switch on your brain and help you concentrate rather than skim read. Very useful for documents you’ve already spent a long time writing.

Important document? Bid? Essay? Advert? Get someone else to read it too – be it friend, family, colleague or professional proofreader and editor, a fresh pair of eyes can work wonders.

Have you got a favourite font? Helvetica? Arial? Nice bit of Comic Sans? I’m a Calibri woman myself.

Get in touch if you want to handover the proofreading pressure. I love it.

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Is your content clear? Or is there a big gap between what you and your potential customers know and understand?

The knowledge gap

The danger of the knowledge gap

Knowledge gap example: not-so-smart meter reading

Jargon has its place: it’s not on your website

Just one more thing: interrogate your content

No offence taken: it’s not dumbing down

Three tips

Is your content clear? Or is there a big gap between what you and your potential customers know and understand?

Is there a knowledge gap, with you thinking ‘that’s obvious’ on one side and your customer scratching their head in confusion on the other? If so, you can’t rely on customers to leap over it. They’re more likely to move on.

So, it’s good to make sure your business content is clear and straightforward, and free of jargon that could confuse.

What is the knowledge gap?

Have you looked at a website and just thought ‘what are they talking about’?

‘I’m interested in this product or service but I feel like they’re trying to trick me or make me feel stupid?’

It’s probably not a trick. It’s more likely the business owner knows so much about what they sell that they forget what others don’t know.

What’s the danger of the knowledge gap?

BEWARE the knowledge gap! You could fall into it. Something could slither up and grab your ankle. Your customers could be left stranded on the other side.

As a rule, people:

• don’t have time to ask ‘what exactly do you mean?’
• don’t want to sound stupid by admitting they don’t understand
• don’t always realise that they’ve misunderstood in the first place.

So, we continue to click, swipe and drag in search of answers to our questions and solutions to our problems. 

Knowledge gap example: not-so-smart meter reading

I’ve just signed up with a friendly new green energy supplier. Our previous supplier (big and unfriendly) installed smart meters in our home but the new company is not connected to the system yet. So, I had to provide a manual meter reading. Questions came to mind:

• how do you get a reading from a smart meter?
• where are the whirling dials?
• can you use the LED panel in the kitchen that shows how much the gas cooker costs to run a day?

The new supplier realised this might be a question and provided a help page. This was a good start. There were some diagrams of different meter types and descriptions of what buttons to press. But none of them matched what I was looking at. 

It turned out I was looking at the wrong thing and it took some time on the supplier’s live chat service to work out what I had to do. (Staffed by a friendly and helpful chap). As our conversation continued, I realised there were two key elements I didn’t understand. These were:

• the ‘thing’ in the kitchen was a misleading distraction. It doesn’t show the meter reading and serves only to show you the cost of your energy use throughout the day (I think).
• there are two smart meters – one for gas, one for electricity. Both in the cupboard under the stairs. I’d thought there was one whizzy combined dual fuel meter… somewhere.

Never assume it’s obvious

Obvious? Maybe to some, but not to me after a busy day. Though it all turned out fine, it felt quite stressful, with:

• sudden panic that our fuel couldn’t be metered
• fleeting embarrassment at my lack of knowledge
• annoyance at bumping my head as I ducked into the cupboard-under-the-stairs for the third time.

Ok, maybe I could have read the instructions and paid more attention when the meters were fitted a year ago. But who does that for every appliance or service they use?

And is it a good idea to rely on your customers to do the sensible, organised thing? Maybe it is a safer bet to assume that they are always busy, stressed and never read instructions. 

I wanted to rewrite that help page straight away because, though it used a helpful tone and simple language, it was missing a few significant bits of information. It created a knowledge gap. It was lucky that the live chat guy was there to throw me a rope bridge so I could scramble across and get my meter reading.

How can you close the knowledge gap?

My purpose as an editor specialising in small businesses is to spot and close the knowledge gaps. There are various methods – fill them up with concrete, build bridges or squeeze the two sides closer together – but here are some for you to think about:

Just one more thing: interrogate your content

It’s difficult to read your own content objectively, isn’t it? Especially if you are short of time and you’re not an expert writer. (And why should you be? You’re running a business doing something else, after all.)

It is hard to make yourself look for mistakes and find better ways to explain your services. And then, when you do try, your brain doesn’t let you see the errors. It’s trying to help – it knows you’re busy.

That’s why newspapers traditionally have reporters to find the stories and editors to tidy them up and check they are safe to print. 

If getting professional help isn’t an option right now, find someone willing to read it who doesn’t work in the same line of business as you.

Ask tough questions

And ask them to be really honest. Ask them to be fastidious. Like US TV detective Columbo, they need to keep asking ‘Just one more thing…’ before being convinced that they really understand what you are trying to say.

If this was before your time, the mac-wearing, shambling Columbo would finish his apparently absent-minded interviews with a casual ‘just one more thing’ question. This always put his suspect on the spot and solved the case. Your reader has to be like the world-weary homicide detective. They’ve got to keep pestering and have an eye for detail. Don’t let your content off the hook, however rich and clever it thinks it is.

Jargon has its place: it’s not on your website

It is easy to blame everything on ‘jargon’. But as Oliver Kamm says in Accidence Will Happen: The Non-Pedantic Guide to English Usage, jargon can be very useful. 

‘The term is usually interpreted as meaning willfully obscure language. In fact, there’s a use and a place for jargon, and the sticklers should pipe down about it. It’s not only legitimate but economical to use jargon when addressing a specialist audience…’

Specialist audience is the key term here. 

For example, I worked on a local weekly newspaper where we could shout ‘splashes’ and ‘NIBs’ and ‘downpagers’ and ‘WOBs’ across the office*. You could almost smell the hot metal. (Actually we could just smell the Mars factory which was near our ramshackle office on Slough Trading Estate. Especially if there was a fire in the nut oven). 

It was a verbal shorthand that also helped us feel like a team.

No doubt you’ve experienced the same in every job you’ve ever had. Working at the British Medical Association for 12 years revealed layer upon layer upon layer of NHS speak. And living with a project manager has tuned my ear to ‘scope’, ‘agile vs Agile’ and ‘measurable criteria’.

(Susie Dent’s entertaining book Modern Tribes: The Secret Languages of Britain covers the common languages of footballers, builders, soldiers, entertainers and many more professions.)

But jargon hasn’t got an official dictionary and dialects vary

But jargon hasn’t got an official dictionary and dialects vary. To return to the bustling newsroom, some people understand ‘ragged right’ while others insist on ‘ranged left’ *see below for definitions

Always think: will everyone, even in my line of work, understand this phrase or acronym?

Even if you are selling B2B (business to business), explain acronyms or unusual terms the first time you mention them – like I did just there with B2B. 

Imagine a new employee is reading your content. They’re clever and keen but not fully embedded. They haven’t had time to learn the unwritten language. Or maybe they’re someone who has switched sector or industry. Or they want to be reassured that you know what you’re talking about.

No offence taken: it’s not dumbing down

And don’t worry that people will be offended by having things spelt out or ‘dumbed down’. Do you feel annoyed when you read something that you recognise and understand? Or are you more likely to feel reassured and confident about what you’re reading?

(You might be helping your readers too. Maybe they’ve been pretending to understand that acronym for years.)

‘You are not dumbing down. You are opening up’, to quote the superb book Content Design by Sarah Richards.

You are showing respect. You are being kind. You are being thoughtful.

Three tips

• Be alert: look for potential knowledge gaps
• Be helpful: assume the reader doesn’t know and translate the jargon
• Be Columbo: keep asking ‘Just one more thing…’

Need some advice on making your content clear for customers? I love to play Columbo and ask the awkward questions, so get in touch for a free chat and let’s get started!

 

‘Rebecca turned a long, technical document into a straightforward guide for our customers.’
Tracey Proudlock, Proudlock Associates

*Newspaper jargon explained

• Splash ? biggest story on the front page
• NIBS ? news in brief. 50 to 10 word short news stories that run in columns at the side of the page. Often announcing flower shows or reporting minor crimes
• Downpagers ? the 4th or 5th shortest story on a page, apart from the nibs
• WOB ? ‘white out of black’ – white text on a black background, which is a way to make stories stand out on the page. A tabloid favourite
• Ragged right or ranged left? Copy that has an uneven, or ‘ragged’, column width on the right or is ‘ranged’ to line up on the left. Like this list, whichever way you say it

Productivity tip: Background noise website

I’ve written this listening to a train on Noisli, a website that plays natural sounds to work to. (Dee dum, dee dum, dee dum, click-aty clack, click-aty clack … I am going over points on the Orient Express, not sitting in my North London spare room). Trains, birds singing, rain, crackling fire, booming thunder, take your pick and tweak the volumes. Silence is… well silence, and music distracts me because I want to sing along. So I find this helps my productivity when I need to concentrate. Worth a try!

Ready for the coding that joins thoughts and ideas? Used sparingly, these symbols can help you engage the emotions of your potential customers

A colon is code for ‘here’s what I mean’. You can use them to introduce a list, or at the beginning of reported speech. She said: ‘I’m getting thirsty.’

A semi-colon is subtle; it is code for ‘pause, and think’. It’s a full stop sitting on a comma, with a longer pause but not quite a stop.

(I’m watching my word count but you can find a full explanation of both, and some useful tests here).

Don’t be intimidated

Don’t feel you have to use them; these bits of codes can be a challenge to get right. Online, it can be better to use full stops to create short and clear sentences instead.

But don’t be intimidated by them either; remember they’ve added clarity, drama and emphasis to everything you read.

Brackets (add a bit of useful information that isn’t essential to the meaning) or [explain something in the text].

Dashes are a handy, informal substitute – though avoid overdoing them – for semi-colons and brackets.

Let’s not forget the question mark, which I nearly did. ‘Where’s the Malbec?’

Step 3: why the apostrophe is your friend

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Three steps to basic punctuation – the vital code you use already.
Step 1: full stop, comma, exclamation mark. A 2-minute tutorial. Are you with me?

From the Very Hungry Caterpillar, through Harry Potter, to every thriller or guide book you’ve ever read, the code of punctuation has made you pause, consider, expect, question, stop and read on quickly.

Correct use of the punctuation code will make your website or marketing easier to read and more effective, and your potential customers won’t even realise why.

Programming code tells computers what to do; punctuation is the code that tells us how to pace our reading. Both are fiendishly clever.

Code has symbols such as [ and < and }, whereas punctuation uses: . and , and ! and : and ; and ‘ and () and []. And, like computer code, you must use punctuation in the right place for it to work.

What do the symbols mean?

What do the symbols mean?

First, the full stop. Teamed with capital letters, this constructs sentences and shows their end. Stop. Get ready for the next idea.

Second, the comma, which lets us add more information to sentences, hopefully without confusing things. As with all code, commas in the, wrong place, can, make a confusing mess.

Finally, for this blog, is the exclamation mark! This is code for a real surprise! Or to show shouting and loudness in speech: ‘Make mine a Malbec!!’ It can go rogue and appear so often that it becomes meaningless!!!!!!

Step 2: colons, semi-colons, brackets, dashes and question marks

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Artesian biscuits?

Artesian = ‘relating to or denoting a well that is bored perpendicularly into water-bearing strata lying at an angle, so that water is supplied by natural pressure’.

I think they meant:

Artisan = ‘a skilled worker who makes things by hand’.

Thomas Editing tip:

We’ve all been there! When writing anything for publication, step back from the A-board or word doc for five minutes. Then go back and check what you’ve written. Switch from enthusiastic creator to critical editor; assume you have made a mistake and look for it.

Your mind needs a break and conscious redirection to spot those ‘obvious’ errors.

Want your spelling checked and more? You supply the free happiness, great service and excellent products and I’ll do the less exciting bits to perfect the words.

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Discover why the hard-working apostrophe deserves some TLC 

Apostrophes are maligned and misused despite multi-tasking for us. We can’t make them study mindfulness, so a bit of effort is needed to master this code.

Why bother?  ‘Everyone gets apostrophes wrong,’ I hear you cry. Well, many people still expect you get them right – especially those deciding which service to trust.

A stray apostrophe breaks the punctuation code that we all subconsciously understand, and makes it harder for customers to understand your message.

A minority will laugh at you and assume that you’re ‘stupid’, before launching into a monologue about the death of the English language. Most others will have a sense that there’s something not quite right…

So, here goes.

Job one: Apostrophes show letters are missing, and make quotes lively.

• It’s = it is
• He’s = he is
• They’re = they are
• There’s = there is

‘We’re gonna need a bigger boat’ rolls off Captain Brody’s tongue in Jaws better than ‘We are going to need a bigger boat’

And to raise the tone a little, Shakespeare’s ‘All the world’s a stage…’ wouldn’t have worked as ‘All the world is a stage..’ (Jaques in Act II, Scene VII, As You Like It)

Job two: Teamed up with an S, they signify ownership of something that is then described.

• The cat’s cute whiskers
• The man’s smart trousers
• The boys’ netball team
• The commuters’ rage at delays on Southern…

(Check here for the details on singular and plural and some practical quizzes).

An exception to this rule is a type of word where we don’t need ‘s or s’: the personal pronoun.

(‘Your own, personal pronoun’ leaps into my head, sung to the tune of Depeche Mode’s Your Own, Personal Jesus. Whatever helps you remember)

Personal pronouns are:

• his
• hers
• theirs
• ours
• yours
• and
• its

Unless trying to impersonate Gollum, would you write his’s, hers’s, theirs’s, our’s, yours’s ?

Nope? Well, my precious, in that case, you wouldn’t say its’s or ‘it’s’ either

Imagine a chair.

Think: ‘This is my chair. It has got legs’  

Use an apostrophe to shorten that statement: ‘This is my chair. It’s got legs’

Easy. The apostrophe contracts ‘it has’ into an informal ‘it’s’.

Give the chair some character by describing its colour.

‘This is my chair. Its legs are bright pink

Here ‘its’ is a separate, three-letter personal pronoun, which DOESN’T need an apostrophe.

Would you write: ‘His’s legs are bright pink after too long in the sun’ or  ‘Hi’s legs are bright pink…’ ?

Nope, you’d say ‘His legs are bright pink…’

RESIST the temptation to say: ‘It’s legs are bright pink’. That is the apostrophe doing its first job of denoting missing letters. Unpick the word and it becomes ‘It is legs are bright pink’, which doesn’t make sense.

Remember, your own personal pronoun doesn’t need an apostrophe. I think they’ve earned a rest.

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Donald Trump will be 45th President of the USA very soon. Whatever happens to the world as a result, it’s been stunned by his use of words on the way.

Whether he’s inventing words, such as tweeting ‘unpresidented’ instead of ‘unprecedented’, or mangling their use bigly, he has demonstrated their ‘very ugly’ power in the wrong hands.

Here are some tips on how to take care with words, so they can share your message or boost your business with clarity, simplicity and trust instead.

Typos matter

Watch out for typographical errors, or typos, in your formal communications, be it on your business websites, in your LinkedIn profiles, applications, charity funding proposals, or tweets about world powers.

Typos make you seem less trustworthy and so damage your credibility, research by Stanford University’s Persuasive Technology Lab has shown. You want to inform, influence and persuade decision-makers, not distract and confuse them.

Beware spellcheckers

Don’t rely on spellcheckers when hunting for typos: most don’t spot the very common mistake of using a correctly spelt word in the wrong place – confusing homophones.

Homophones are not woodwind instruments, but words that sound the same while being spelt differently. Examples include: ‘there’, ‘their’ and ‘they’re’; ‘hear’ and ‘here’; and ‘to’, ‘too’ and ‘two’.

Proofreading plan

Following a process will help you check – or proofread – your document effectively.

Take care: our minds are unreliable proofreaders when it comes to spotting our own mistakes. Our subconscious zips over double words, spelling mistakes or rogue punctuation without giving us the mental prod to correct them.

So, when proofing important communications:

• Make the mental switch from writer/creator to proofreader by taking a break or doing a different task for five minutes. Come back ready to be critical.
• Mistakes are easier to spot on paper than on screen, so print if practical.
• Read once looking for spelling mistakes or words to double-check. If you are in any doubt, look them up.
• Read again, this time looking for repeated words, missing words and those sneaky homophones.
• Read it a third time, out loud if you can, checking the syntax – which is the arrangement of words and phrases to create well-formed sentences, not a new spray for sinus pain. Does it make sense? Not Trump-sense, but real sense?
• If you can, ask someone else to read it for you.

Use dictionaries

Though there are many online dictionaries, don’t forget the pocket dictionary; the physical act of looking up a word will help you remember it.

Finally, remember:

Don’t worry about being ‘bad’ at spelling: concentrate on being good at checking.

I’d love to help enhance your words. Take a look at thomasediting.co.uk, email rebecca@thomasediting.co.uk or call 07531 061007

Discipline, stories, shop windows … and cats. Why I’ve come to love Twitter

Once, I was wary of Twitter; now I know I’m addicted. (I can give it up whenever I want, of course … )

Three attributes make it worthwhile – and have me hooked – as I set myself up as Thomas Editing: copy-editing with clarity, simplicity and trust.

Twitter:

• makes me edit every time I use it and, as an editor, that’s a very useful discipline. How do I make the most of 140 characters?
• is jam-packed with different and real stories, which I think are the lifeblood of small business. I want to help you explain what you do or sell, and why it is special.
• is a shop window for all that is inspiring, innovative, and tasty, right on my doorstep. Twitter helps me be positive and supportive towards everyone creating stuff. Yes, there’s also plenty to shock, outrage and upset, but sometimes the micro – my local ‘here and now’ – needs to outweigh the macro of world events that we can’t control. I want to help people look ahead.

And need I mention the cat pictures?

I can use words to give clarity, simplicity and trust to your business story. Get in touch for an obligation-free chat about my services and flexible fees.