I help people understand health
I have 25 years’ plus experience as a non-fiction copy editor. I edit patient information leaflets and websites for the NHS and health charities.
Did you know the average reading age in the UK is 9 to 11 years? Health literacy can be even lower. Add to that our pain, confusion, fear, sadness and anger when we’re not well. It’s hard to take in important information. So, as an editor, I want to make patient information easier to follow. I want people to understand what is happening to them and what they need to do – or not do – next.
I can:
• help you meet those 3-year review deadlines
• join your team for larger projects
As well as checking spelling, syntax, and grammar, I consider:
• reading age, sentence length, active voice
• tone, colloquialisms, inclusive language
• use of acronyms, negative contractions, space-saving devices
• accessibility of font size, colour contrast, images
• description of numbers and risk
• clarity of graphics
• Q and A formats
• headings
• key point summaries
• explaining words used in the document
My approach
I collaborate. Patient information editing is collaborative and iterative.
I respect the healthcare workers who made the content. They diagnose, treat and care. I edit. So, I’m not looking for ‘mistakes’, I’m looking for the message they want to convey.
I motivate people to act. I want to give them the info to keep their appointments or stick to the exercise regime.
I’m direct and honest. Not euphemistic, or defensive, or formal. Say ‘poo’ instead of ‘stools’ and more of your audience will understand.
I believe it’s opening up, not dumbing down.
Please call 07531 061 007 or email rebecca@thomasediting.co.uk
Member of the Patient Information Forum
Professional member of the Chartered Institute for Editing and Proofreading (professional member)
Approved supplier for Imperial College Healthcare NHS Trust
‘It’s rare to find a supplier who’s not only efficient but also flexible and easy to collaborate with. We highly recommend.’
Rachel Watson, associate director of user insight and user experience design, Imperial College Healthcare NHS Trust
Rebecca has helped us to make our information as clear and accessible as possible for its target audience. She offers many positive suggestions for improvement and always hits her deadline. Highly recommended.
Tom Bishop, head of patient information, Anthony Nolan
Rebecca’s ability to write for a range of audiences was wonderful along with her knowledge of research, evidence and review processes. Highly tecommend.
Caroline Barker, marketing and production manager at Terrence Higgins Trust
